Saturday, March 14, 2009

Electric man 3

22 years later it was Jon's graduation and he still had a crush on the girl, Jessica. He had known her for seven years. She had long brown hair and blue eyes. Blah, blah, blah. Lets move on to the villain...
This man named Deja Ravu tried to make a machine that will help his lungs in 1985 but something went wrong. The machine turned him into a rock monster with electricity and stuff like that. It also turned him into a bad guy. He went underground and he had been there ever since... Twenty five years later Deja Ravu rose out of the ground on the day of Jon's graduation when Jon's parents gave him his graduation present, it was an electric car.
When Deja Ravu rose from the ground, he crashed and broke Jon's car. Jon was bursting into tears. So Jon quickly got his Electric Man suit. He flew out from the tall buildings and landed on the ground right in front of Deja Ravu.
"Pretty strong for a guy underground" said Electric Man to Deja Ravu.
"Whats your point, thunderbolt butt" said Deja Ravu.
Elecrtic Man could not think of a come back so he just did his fire blast.
Deja Ravu then punched Electric Man right in the stomach with his big rock hand. This did not hurt Electric man because he was wearing his metal suit armor.
Right when electric man's armor was week, Deja Ravu punched him again and he flew 50 feet. When Elctric Man fell down , he played dead so Deja Ravu would think that he was dead. Deja Ravu then ran and jumped super far away.
Electric Man's mom was really worried because she could not find Jon. So Electric Man quickly went into the bathroom changed out of his suit and went to find his mom.
His mom said to Jon, "where were you?".
Jon said, "Jessica needed me to help her with her computer"
"you missed out on all of the excitement'" his mom said.
" The excitement must have been solid!!" said Jon

Saturday, February 28, 2009

Eletrick man2

"I cannot tell my mom about this she is going to freak!" said Jon.
"Honey, where are you?" said Jon's mom. " we are going to move to New York where your cousin, Josh lives."
Jon says, "okay". Jon was nervous because there can be a lot of bad guys that he could fight and he was unsure that he was ready.
When Jon got to his cousin's house, he immediately asked his aunt if she can sew him a suit. "Yes. Sure I can sew you a suit". It took her 5 hours to finish the suit. It was black with a v shape going from his shoulders to his chest. And the V shape was yellow. Jon asked his aunt to add one little thing to his suit. He wanted to put an yellow E below the V shape on the shirt. It was now finished.
Then Jon sat on the couch to watch the news to see some crimes. His aunt said, " Since when were you into watching the news?"
Jon responds with, "I just got into the habit after that faithful electric shock."
"Oh no!", Jon said, "there is a burglary happening right now!"
Jon asked his aunt if she can hand him the suit that she had made. Jon went into the bathroom and opened the window and flew away.
When he got there, everyone was shocked to see a super hero. All of New York did not believe in superheros. "Did you know that burglary is illegal?", said Electric Man. Electric Man hit the bags out of the burglar's hands. Electric Man did not know that only his hands can be metal and punch something so hard that it can fly back!!!
Electric Man said. "Now we're talk'n!" He did his fire blast right in the burglar's stomach. He did not do it too hard because he did not want to hurt the burglar. Electric Man told the police that, " It was under control" while he was holding the burglar by the shirt. All of New York also did not know that a superhero is small, 47 inches.
He quickly went back into the window at his aunt's house. When he got out of the bathroom, his aunt said, "why would you want your suit in the bathroom?"
Jon responds with, " I just wanted to hold my suit while I was in the bathroom."
The End

Friday, January 30, 2009

Electric man

One day a little boy named Jon had a birthday coming up. He was going to Hawaii.
He was so excited! Because it was his birthday! It was a long ride to go to Hawaii.
But they got there. "Cake time! Cake time!", his mom said. Jon said, "Can we wait for cake, because i want to open up my presents."
"Yes," his mom said.
"This is the coolest thing ever." Jon said. It was metal armor. Jon said "can I play with it?"

"wait until you open all of your presents." said his mom.

His last present was a spider man game. But he wanted to play with the metal armor. He asked his mom and she said "yes." Jon played with his metal armor for a long time.
"It is getting stormy", his mom said. But Jon did not listen. Then Jon got electrocuted!
Jon's mom took Jon to the doctor's office.
Jon was finally awake. when Jon got out of the doctor's office he turned into metal and shot out electricity and fire.
"I am Electric Man!"