tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217789395904330898.post775927491430735955..comments2009-12-05T10:24:42.153-08:00Comments on Stories of a 1st Grader: Electric manPaulyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023936589458435753noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217789395904330898.post-88131576251154899302009-04-10T19:36:00.000-07:002009-04-10T19:36:00.000-07:00Very captivating indeed! I enjoyed myself througho...Very captivating indeed! I enjoyed myself throughout the entire story. Thank you for this excting and thrilling story!!!<BR/>-Haley (your Mom's friend)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217789395904330898.post-4721346594692721102009-03-05T13:59:00.000-08:002009-03-05T13:59:00.000-08:00This is an excellent piece of Minimalism. Young St...This is an excellent piece of Minimalism. Young Stamas clearly has no time for gratuitous adverbs which helps the story move along at a refreshing pace. It's an interesting exploration of the theme of mortality, or indeed immortality, and I'd certainly be interested to see how Electricity Man exploits his randomly obtained power. Or is it so random? There must be a reason for Jon's Mum to give him the gift of Armour...<BR/>Let me know when the next Vignette is completed.<BR/>Ben Robinson- West Sussex, EnglandAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217789395904330898.post-68529470637805410222009-02-26T20:43:00.000-08:002009-02-26T20:43:00.000-08:00what a great story my son!! i am proud of you! kee...what a great story my son!! i am proud of you! keep it going!!Dominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16535126134851732710noreply@blogger.com